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2015年9月17日大陆托福考试解析

2015-09-21 15:16

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2015917日大陆托福写作解析

综合写作 

 

 

Topic议题

设立森林国际基金

Reading

Listening

Thesis总论点

因为森林被破坏环境影响,提议建立international fund有三个好处

阅读的三个好处没用

Sub-point 1  

分论点1

防止农业对森林的破坏

 计划减少对森林的农业食用,但是人口增长对食物需求增多,如果不允许减少部分森林用作农业的话,人们会用更多的科技手段在有限的耕地上来提高生产,对环境的伤害更大

Sub-point 2

分论点2

对森林周边村庄有好处,改善周边村庄生存环境

计划中的钱会给到土地所有人,大部分是政府或者土地所有人,很多人都不住在村庄,而且政府会把钱用在其他项目而不是提高村庄人们的生活状况

Sub-point3

分论点3

  

 推进生物多样性

计划鼓励人们种植树木,但是无法控制人们种哪些树,类似于Plantation forest 只会是单一树种用作商业用途,所以没有多样性可言

独立写作:

Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Since the world has changed so much in the past fifty years, advice our grandparents can give us is not useful.

    There is a common expression that goes, “with age comes wisdom.” Wisdom is the ability to use your past experience to make good decisions about your future. Regardless of how much the world has changed in the past fifty years, I still believe the advice my grandparents can give me is good.

  My grandparents have had a lot of experiences and survived a lot of hardships. When my great grandmother died young, my grandmother had to grow up fast and help raise her brothers and sisters. This was during the Great Depression, when people had to save every penny just to be able to get by. My grandmother has talked with me about how she got through these hard times, and by listening to her stories I have learned many valuable lessons. I have learned to value the things that I have and to work hard for things that I want. When it comes to taking care of my family, I always ask my grandmother for advice.

  My grandparents are also a good resource for advice, because they have been around longer and, therefore know more of the world. In my studies, I may have had the opportunities to travel all over the world. While both of my grandfathers have not traveled as much as me, that does not mean they have not experienced the world. During World War II, both of my grandfathers were stationed abroad. They not only lived in Europe for a long period, but they also were able to interact with troops of foreign armies. They did not have the educational opportunities that I have had, but that does not mean that I know more about the world than they do.

  Admittedly, there are some areas in which I cannot go to my grandparents for advice, namely technology. Cell phones and computers were not around until my grandparents retired, so they have never had to use this kind of technology for work or study. While my grandparents have tried to keep up with the times, they are certainly not experts. Whenever I visit my grandmother, for example, she always asks me to fix her computer. I would say the only thing I cannot go to my grandparents for advice is anything concerning technology.

  Even though there are certain areas in which my grandparents are not that well informed, this does not mean that they do not have good or useful advice. Grandparents’ wisdom from the experiences they have had can give us insight and help us make decisions.


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