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2016年6月六级写作第一篇范文

2016-06-21 11:48

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本次六级考试没有继续延续传统的漫画作文或者英语引语类作文,反而考察了较为简单的话题作文,即用英语给出话题。只要考生审题明确清晰,不跑离主题得高分不是困难之事。同时也再次印证跟科技相关的话题始终是六级作文考察的重点。 这篇文章开篇第一段应该引出话题讨论,第二段从分析正反利弊的角度进行假设,第三段得出自己的最终观点给出建设性意见即可,整体来看不算难题。下面给出参考范文:

When it comes to the topic of robots, there are fiction films in mounting numbers that float through our head, such as Ex Machina. Try to imagine what will happen when an increasing number of robots replace us in industry and daily lives. That must be an interesting question.

From my perspective, I can think of some merits that can be listed as below. First things first, it will lay a solid foundation for improving industrial efficiency, which to a large extent promotes the advancement of economy. In addition, it will liberate the workforce, making public do brain work. Whereas, the shortcomings should not be ignored. For one thing, we will rely on technology increasingly, losing own initiative. For another, if artificial intelligence has its own awareness, it is still a heated debate in our society. We are afraid that one day human being will be replaced in every aspects of our life, even eating, sleeping.

Were it left to me to give some proposals, I would list the following ones. Not only should we make use of technology properly but also give full play to human wisdom. Do not rely on robots to do everything. It is reasonable for us to believe that the prospect of robots will be far from dim.


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李衍葳: 哈尔滨新东方国内考试部教师,主讲四级六级写作和翻译,考研写作,成人新概念课程。BEC-Higher剑桥商务英语高级证书获得者,写作项获得Exceptional最高等级,剑桥英语教学能力证书TKT考试10分获得者,拥有交替传译培训证书。曾获2013年新东方集团授课比赛国内组二等奖,2015年新东方东北教学区授课比赛一等奖,2015年度人气爆棚奖,2016财年新东方教育科技集团优秀教师。授课风格彪悍幽默、激情洋溢,深受学员喜爱。

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