>>>2015年3月14日雅思考试真题回忆及解析

2015年3月14日雅思写作解析及语料库

教育类：(新题出现)

Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

两种观点讨论布局图：

首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

二段：正方观点的展开：一定要有对于细节的展开或例证的支持

三段：反方观点的展开：一定要有对于细节的展开或例证的支持

尾段：再次亮明观点+总结理由

薛鹏原创雅思写作语料库：

　　1. strengthen the family tie v增强家庭纽带

　　2. daycare centers = childcare center n幼儿中心

　　3. early childhood education institutions n儿童早教学校

　　4. mental growth, good charter-training and the cultivation of group experience brought about by attending nursery school 由上托儿所带来的精神成长，性格训练以及群体性经验的培养。

　　5. learn to communicate and associate with their peers v学习和同龄人交流交往

新东方网薛鹏原创范文赏析：

首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点+ 作家立场

Children’s growth education is a great concern for a great many parents, however, not every parent have enough energy to look after their kids，so, people often fall into a dilemma when facing with the question of sending their children to childcare centers and asking their relatives to take care of them. Personally speaking, encouraging children to grow up under the care of grandparents is a superior choice although childcare center can sometimes has an auxiliary role to play.

　　解析：look after sb = take care of sb = see to sb = attend to sb v照顾某人

　　解析：people often fall into a dilemma when facing with the question of A and B 人们在面对……的时候，常常陷入两难的选择

　　解析：under the care of sb 在……的关照下

　　解析：is a superior choice v 是一个更好的选择

　　解析：has an auxiliary role to play v可以发挥辅助性的作用

　　点评：首段个性开篇;主题明确;文风朴素。